looks good, but being funny is not the strong point of most musicians, i'd leave the attempts at humour out. (put it this way, have you heard billy connollys music from before he took up comedy? not the best) i wouldnt boto cormac, dont bother calling yourself a nerd. theres enough people to put you down, you shuold play your strengths without being a ott big head, seems from what i saw that this is easily achievable by the pair of you. you come accross as benig sound and stuff. good stuff though. nice layout and the cartoons are a good idea. but never take advise from an idiot. as i am one i can give this advise in good faith. so ignore what youve just read. trust me.

Yeah I aint keen on that & I'm sure you'll get in trouble for using other peoples images.

um... its ok. kinda find the humour a little annoying, but its good that its simple. it strikes me a little amateur though. no offence.

none taken... feedback is good. yeah, i suppose humor is often used as a kind of self defence mechanism in that way...like "we're not really serious about this anyway, so laugh if you want".. anyway... good point. the images were drawn by a guy called phil. he did them of us and for us. his comics are great so we asked him. no trouble there then. cheers. be finishing it up soon i hope, your thoughts will be considered.